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night notes from my bedroom

Posted on Mar 4th, 2006 by sass : integral feminist philosopher sass

behind the wall
coal trains cart loads
across the night

my house rings
(like)
a singing bowl
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Metta : metaphorical longshoreman
about 1 month later
Metta said

as I read this the second time, it came with special effects as I heard a train off in the distance, felt the vibration of its travel and I was humbled by the fact that you could make this image of trainsounds into a type of meditation… I can see it, hear it, feel it in my bones and beyond.

so many words in response to so few words… but your words pack a power punch!  I do love poetry like that.

OfMay : Golden Eagle
about 1 year later
OfMay said

Love this! So much in so few words!

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